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Question: Yo hips long time no see heres a poem man!?
How many nights
have I lain in terror,
O Creator Spirit, Maker of night and day,

only to walk out
the next morning over the frozen world
hearing under the creaking of snow
faint, peaceful breaths!.!.!.
snake,
bear, earthworm, ant!.!.!.

and above me
a wild crow crying 'yaw yaw yaw'
from a branch nothing cried from ever in my lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yooooooooooooooo jordon! hugs! i'm finally here! i'm a perfectionist!?!? why she say that for!? lmao!. i gotta say, when i read that, i felt the need to be dancing around the campfire beating on some tomtoms lol!. but i really liked that!. at least it makes some sense!. now, tell me what the last line means!. umm nothing cried from ever in my life!.!.!.!.
so imma think about writing a poem!.!.!.u got any specific topic!? ooo let one person put it down and imma go whoopy on em!.lol thats just my mood today :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is great!.!.!.!.it sounds as if it has been taken from a Native American ritual chant!.!.!.it speaks of a communion with the earth - rarely imagined by us urban dwellers!.!.!.!.the last line made me think too (hm!? What does he mean by that!?!.!.!.good way to end a poem)Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have an interesting stream-of-consciousness!. I bet you're fun at parties!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Huh!? I dont get it!Www@QuestionHome@Com