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Question: When did you realize you needed others and couldn't do it on your own!?
I’ve been waiting
a while now
to say thanks,
thanks a lot
I’ve done okay and today
I thought I’d say so, but
there’s still this fire
that smolders where
the dogs of depression
lick
their filthy jowls
and wait, but
thanks anyway!.
Mostly, I’m happy when
I pause on a thought and
get a chance to see it
before I
kill it
but I still smell
the fires, they
have this way of burning out
the senses and
when you can’t see
hear smell feel
a thank you is
a far gone
thing!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like this one a lot!. As it gives me a chance to say, Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
After 23 years of life in "and now for something completely"!.!.crazies,I crawled in the doors and found life has meaning and the promises do come true!. I am truly thankful to all who have helped me along the way,and have said so many times!. The dogs of depression have currently stolen my slippers,but this too shall pass!.Thank you for the gratitude reminder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It takes such strength and courage to get past those "dogs of depression"!. Seeing past the fire to the others that you need, and transcending it are two different things!. You cannot accomplish either if you doubt yourself!. This poem has such truth and power!. It has inspired me to think past my own self doubt!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As a young man, I doubted the need for the others!. When I started reading books, doubts began to vaporize one after the other!. The last doubt demolished after (between the lines) reading of "The Prince", just to
realized that :
"We need each other
now
more than we want
to admit!."*
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I've always had people around,but always been independent!.Too much,some say!.It's good to know there's back-up if I need it!.
Great poem!.I get lost in your words and am usually way behind in the queue of answerer's! You know I love your questions and poems,but when will you find time to write all those books!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I still smell the fires that burn!. I realized I needed you all when I came to this site and made so many wonderful friends!. Never lonely again, never alone again!. Luv to all my friends out there!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
The fire that keeps burning is what keeps us going!. And I want to say thank you for all you the fun and laughter you have contributed to your readers!. We appreciate it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Pssst!.!.!.dogs of depression!?
lick their filthy jowls!?
What kind of pack ya hanging with, man!?
Me!? I found this hat near the burning fires,
nah, no need to thank!.
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Your poem expresses a universal truth!. It contains much poetic expression!. Your concluding message is also true--in the end, part of us remains alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
None of us can walk through this life completely alone!. We all need friends around us to talk with when the "fire that smolders where the dogs of depression lick their filthy jowls" Very powerful piece!. Thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com
Seems like we've both been haunted by unwanted (!?) dogs and vultures!. May I say thank you for sharing this imagery that I have been seeing a lot, and using words so right!.
SueWww@QuestionHome@Com
"!.!.!.but / there’s still this fire / that smolders where / the dogs of depression / lick / their filthy jowls" Excellent! (I realized it when I did the 12th step!.)
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People who need people are the luckiest people in the world !.Www@QuestionHome@Com
when I stopped trying and , without having asked, a dozen hands reached down n helped me stand back up!. thank you for reminding meWww@QuestionHome@Com
What a lovely poem! I knew I needed others when I was trying to get best answer!. I haven't received one in such a long time that I do believe I've lost my touch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A long time ago!.!.!.!.!.!.when I found I couldn't get out of a mess I was in on my own!. I still don't know if I ever thanked them enough!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your poem reminds me to say "thanks in advance"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"no man is an island" or woman for that matter!.!.!.among friends I hear
thank yous in all kinds of words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
when i stayed inside my home for three weeks!. i finally woke up and reached out for help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com