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Question: I hope you like ,my last poem here!?
Night is long, path is dark
Hold me now forget the spark
Fire hears my gasps are near
Don’t lose the grip
On my bleeding wrist
Death is here
I can’t see the risk
Breathing shallow
The sweating drips
On my pale face
like cold crisps
I wished you were
The only dream
I hoped so much
To keep your touch
The soft kiss
That I already miss
It was today
i saw the wedding
I will be alone
But no more now
I m going there
To the heaven I crave
I was so brave
I choose to die
I choose to leave
I had a pride
And she is the bride
I m not good enough
To anyone but you
They took me far
They carried me away
The last thing I heard
Was the wheel’s car
I can see witness
My life was hard
My past was gone
I heard the song
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it can use a little improvement, the beginning was great!.!.!. then it kind of faded off!. but! it's a great start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com