Fat white pussy cat
Stretched languidly beside me
Tail twitching softly
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Long Whiskers wiggle
Outstretched paws steadily knead
Mighty hunter dreams
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Stretched languidly beside me Tail twitching softly *************** Long Whiskers wiggle Outstretched paws steadily knead Mighty hunter dreams Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You get a standing ovation from my crowd! I'm owned by five cats, one in particular lends herself to haiku, and I've written three for her specially!. Three mews, two purrs, and a Mrrroww!?! I hate the way the most innocent words get censored, because perhaps one of their multiple connotations has a sexual meaning that's "Dirty"!. There's no such thing as dirty language, some may be inappropriate, but sometimes there's just a certain way to say things!. They also edit and tell me to spell check direct quotations from the KJV Bible, Go figure!? I call a shovel a shovel, and a spade a glob dinged shovel with a point!Www@QuestionHome@Com I like them, except for the humiliating reference inherent in the crack about pussy!. This is the most efficient killer among the feline to whom you are referring in so dismissive a fashion!. Shame on you! Otherwise, I think they're fine!. Let me offer one of my own, just written!. Lying soft in boneless slumber, adrift in dreams of savage plunder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very much!. Honestly the beginning line doesn't offend me, just put whichever phrase you think would work for the poem!. Its your poem, your own unique voice!. I won't try to change it for you!. I loved how the first poem showed how your cat stretched herself to get all those kinks out and the dreams she was having about chasing those gray mice who were clutching the sumptuous greasy cheesy treat in their jaws as their paws were scampering, hurrying, carrying them to their tiny dark openings in the walls of unknown and sanctity!. I loved how it appears that you wrote these poems from natural observation, they're real and exotic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com nice summation of the prevailing characteristics of those fluff balls of the domesticated non-ownable feline persuasion,,, "poody" cat does not work, your first inclination was spot onWww@QuestionHome@Com mew did mew did it's kitty ku!.!.!.deeeeeelishWww@QuestionHome@Com Not only did I like it, George and Grace are giving you a standing ovation!!Www@QuestionHome@Com poody cat might have sounded betterWww@QuestionHome@Com umWww@QuestionHome@Com I did, I did taw a Haikued Tat!Www@QuestionHome@Com |