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Question: Is this a good poem that I wrote!?
I'm a friend in need and you are a true friend in deed
You heal my wounds and patch me up when I bleed
When my room is too dark!. You always turn on the lights
You always warm me up!.!.when I shiver through the night
And I'm really glad to have you in my life!.
You're the reminder to me next to Allah that things will be alright
You see the good in me even if I'm 99 percent bad
you r the most best friend I have ever had!.!.!.
May God reward you tremendously!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is a good and nice poem!. You squeeze a few too many syllables in, but it's still very good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is absolutely beautiful, bravo! Almost brought a tear to my eye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its really good im good at that stuff tooWww@QuestionHome@Com