Cats are pretty,
Dogs are rough,
Bunnies are bouncy,
Snakes are wiggly,
People are straight,
Houses are quiet and do nothing,
Drinks are drinked up,
Clocks are dingy!.
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Dogs are rough, Bunnies are bouncy, Snakes are wiggly, People are straight, Houses are quiet and do nothing, Drinks are drinked up, Clocks are dingy!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Tell that little lady she has more talent than a lot of the adults who write here (I refuse to single anyone out)!. We all enjoyed her joining in the party and hope she comes back really soon!. Lovely poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it is absolutely charming!. I wondered why she thought clocks were "dingy" but then I realised that she meant not dingy (dull, miserable) but ding-y, i!.e!. they go "ding!" How fantastic, really fantastic!Www@QuestionHome@Com Very nice! I love the description of the house especially!. Very talented six year old!Www@QuestionHome@Com No, but she was obviously influenced by Zelda Fitzgerald!. But it seems more Gertrude Stein, but maybe that's just the pain killers talking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is very good especially for a six year old!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Are you sure Zelda Fitzgerald didn't write this!?Www@QuestionHome@Com It is very good! tell ur granddaughter she did a great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com |