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Question: What are your thoughts on my poems!?
be honest! none of that its awesome stuff just because you want the points If you like it i want to know why and if not then tell me exactly why!. don't try and be nice either but 100% honest

You or them!?
You work to become what they want you to be

You change your style, your hair, and your attitude

You lose your self in an attempt to find them

To be on their level


You forget everything you stand for

And abandon everything you care about

You lose the real you

And for what!?


To fit in!? To be part of their crowd!?

Why work so hard to be like them when you're already you

Why abandon yourself to become them!.


As yourself you're an individual

Your unique, one of a kind

But as them, your nothing

Your just a face in their crowd

When people look at you all they see is them


When you try to find them, you lose yourself

But when you try to find yourself, you discover who you truly are

I guess the final question would be,

"Do you want to be lost, or do You want to be found!?"
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like it
because it is true how people try to fit in and change them selves just to do it Www@QuestionHome@Com

You sound like my mother when I was in Jr High School!.

Nothing about the loneliness that you feel that makes you want to be part of the crowd -

nothing about the feeling when you realize that you have changed your feather so much, you cannot fly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great poem
my reason of liking it is because it is a very true
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