Would I be a good poet?

Question: Would I be a good poet!?

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Thats my poetry website!. It was kind of my dream to be a poet and I am not sure if I am good or not!. Should I keep going or give up!? Tell me your opinion and the poem you based it on please!. >!.<Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Based on "my confession", I think you have potential, and that is not an empty word!.!.!. I see a rhythm and dangerous emotion behind your work!.!.!.it's very deep and on the edge of darkness but not cheap and self-wallowing!.
Sometimes I think you are struggling a little with finding the right words, or you have trouble finding words that continue the mood you want!. It seems like sometimes you end very bluntly, I guess!. For instance, "like that of an ape" seems to ruin the mood as does the mention of blues and a need for a knife!. I can tell you are trying to drift away from cliches, and that's good, however!.
That's everything I honestly feel!. Your actually very talented!. Delve deeper a little, however, into expressing exactly how you really feel

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keep going, it's gretty good just keep practicing at itWww@QuestionHome@Com