im in eighth grade and the theme is wow its about how my dad left my family for another girl i know its this poem is wrong and it doesnt rhyme so will you PLEASE HELP ME make it rhyme alot more and make it more powerful and make it correct i have to turn it in for a grade then im going to send this to my dad
It was hard when it happened,
But now its over so I sit here laughing,
I can’t believe you left us for that person,
It made us all sad but now you’ll regret it,
I can’t believe I thought you loved us but now,
I don’t care anymore because I know who truly loves us,
I didn’t see you for a year, you didn’t even bother to let us hear,
but its okay because now I know who true family is,
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im not really a poetry guy so after you help revise it will you tell me what type of poetry it is like is it a limerick, haiku whateverWww@QuestionHome@Com