Please tell me what you think of this poem ?

Question: Please tell me what you think of this poem !?

Immortal
One night I took that immortal drink that sent me on this high,
warm, refreshing, elixer of life,
someone has to die!.
Transported by a ray of light that raidiated from the moon!.
I snatched my prey up in the night,
death shall come soon!.
Back at the lair I stood with a body on my bed,
blood on the pillow,
soon she will walk with the undead!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is wonderful!. You have taken me to one of the best short stories I ever read -- the theme was the same!.

Well done!

Thankst!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Reminds me of the series "True Blood"!.
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Short, simple, needs work!.

Keep working and writing!.
SamWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ooh, scary!.!.Well, creepy!. I like it!. It's cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's a little scary!.!. but!.!.
it's still cool!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that!.!.!.is really ccreepy, but it says it well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com