My second poem, what do you think?

Question: My second poem, what do you think!?

Fear me for I am fate, Love me for I do not hate, Treasure me so I will not kill, Rescue me for I am real!.

I am the wolf that howls at night, I am darkness there is no light, Don't deny how scared you are, if you run you won't go far!.

I'm very fierce guess how I know, when people see me they scream than go, I hunt my prey than strike them down, after they're killed there is no sound!.

So Fear me for I can kill, Love me for I am real, Treasure me so I won't bite, Rescue me even though I'm not light!.

I bit my lip than closed my eyes, they took me away to paradise!.

It's not as long as my last one, but I'm just really bored so I wrote it, as you can see, I'm in love with wolf's becuase my last poem had a wolf in it too!. hehe!.
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I think it is Lovely!

It accents that which is Fear!.
Fear of the predator that is instilled into the hearts of the prey!.
It gives the idea of fear, and the lust of a kill that is brought upon by the words your hand it sings!.

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Bmar(Brandon Mariotto)

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it's great, but be careful with the whole rhyme thing!. try using a rhyming dictionary so that lines like 'real' and 'kill' actually fit with the rhyme & rhythm!.
"resuce me even though i'm not light" is a weird line!. use the rhyming dictionary for a better fit!.
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Its damn good! Some how I'm confusing u w/ my friend Blondy!. When she is bored she writes a good stuff; but when she is really bored, the stuff she writes 'd be higher than my IQ-level!. So please don't get very bored!.!.and I do luv wulfs!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

poetry, pure poetry,
pure beautiful poetry,
pure so super beautiful poetry!.!.!.!.

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everytime you used the word "than", it should be "then"!. other than that, its pretty awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Keep trying!. The word is WOLVES!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thanks for your answer!. this poem i really loved it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!. You should keep working on it, it could be something some day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, I like it!. You have a way with prose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG i love it! STAR FOR U!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

like it, try id instead of real
Fear me for I am fate, Love me for I do not hate, Treasure me so I will not kill, Rescue me for I am the id!.

I am the wolf that howls at night, I am darkness there is no light, Don't deny how scared you are, if you run you won't go far!.

I'm very fierce guess how I know, when people see me they scream then go, I hunt my prey then strike them down, after they're killed there is no sound!.

So Fear me for I can kill, Love me for I am the id, Treasure me so I won't bite, Rescue me even though I'm not light!.

I bit my lip then closed my eyes, they took me away to paradise!.

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