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Position:Home>Poetry> My little sister wrote this poem and I think it's very cute!?Question: My little sister wrote this poem and I think it's very cute!!? She's 11!. This is what she wrote about the Fall Fair that's coming this weekend:
In the center of town whilst walking one day I heard a friendly penguin say: "Gather round one and all The Fall Fair is here Let's have a ball!" I took his advice and went off on my way So eager to dance So eager to play! I played at the raffle, I rode on the train I sure am glad that it didn't rain! I think that's really cute!. What about you!? Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think this is very cute as well!. Great praise should be given to her, and encouragement to write more!. Put this poem in a scrap book, or a picture frame! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it's cute, too, and awesome that she's using her creativity!. Tell her to keep up the good work!. Being creative is a great outlet!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com super cute!.!.!.she's actually very talentedWww@QuestionHome@Com Yes, very cute!.!.!.BUT she could of had that friendly little penguin get decapitated by a train!Www@QuestionHome@Com its great, the enthusiasm comes through!. keep encouraging her to write more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, yes!. It is kind of cute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's wonderful! Tell her to keep writing poems!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com |