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Is love preferred when loves not served
is love inferred or is love deserved
is love deferred or does love come first

do we take a test to figure out this mess
so we can make sense
of all the things we placate

or do we test
test ourselves
and create a foundation
so we can find true love in this crazy situation

is love material
or is it unknown
how can one find love
if loves not shown

do i live for the love of it
and hope for the best
or do i pursue love
and hope to build a life from itWww@QuestionHome@Com

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