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Words Work for Me

Speak to me of love,
your words wrap around
warmly embracing me
as powerfully as do
your muscled arms!.

Marinate me with
their liquid sweetness,
in them your essence
I taste and savor!.
Speak to me of love!.

I take them into my
special places where
they fit perfectly,
pulsating every fiber
of my being, please

Speak to me of love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
And when spoken to, you will know!.!.!.

Powers potent that you possess
Sincere strength in your caress
Softest torture from your lips
Healing found at your tips
Warmth released in your embrace
Kindness tinged in your face
This and more in your being
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Dear Eve,
Your Adam must be a very special person to you if his words have this affect upon you!.

May I be allowed to make a few suggestions!?

Wrap around and Embracing really have the same meaning as do taste and savor, so perhaps some alteration may be called for so that your words become much more personal to him!.

Speak to me your words of love,
that their strength might embrace me
as powerfully as I do your muscled
arms!.

Let me languish in their gentle
flowing sweetness, that I might
be overpowered the very essence
they give forth!.

I take them unto myself, into
my private special places!.
There to fit perfectly; pulsating
my every fiber!.

Speak to me your words of love!.

Sorry for chopping your original up so much, but please feel free to ignore my suggestion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is there a full moon tonight!? Whisper these words in his ears and he can refuse you nothing! Lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Listen, while
love speaks!.
Calls out
from the heart!.
Expresses
yearnings from
deep within!.
Respond in kind!.!.!.
!.!.!.connection will follow!.
It is the way of all flesh!.

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If I could speak of love , I 'd be a poet!.!.Your words touches (the heart) deep down, and now I 'm speechless!.
Well put !Www@QuestionHome@Com

For love is the food which feeds our souls!.
Wonderful poem, it left me speechless!. Thank you for being you and sharing this with us!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Can't answer now, am headed for a cold shower!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

those words work well for me and howl away woman!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great title!

Now I'm thinking of sports or something!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

spooning is in order hereWww@QuestionHome@Com