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Question: What do you think of my poem!? Thank you!.!?
Someone told me to summerize how I feel!.
I feel you!.
I feel blue!.
I feel lost!.
I can't afford to pay the cost!.
This feeling isn't new!.
I've always been this blue!.
I know I can make it!.
I have a bad habit and I'm going to break it!.
I'll pray!.
I'll get down on my knees!.
I'll beg God: Help me Please!.
At the end you will see!.
The truth will set me free!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Apart from a misspelling it's very good!.
Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i never saw someone summerizing feelings so true,
especially from a gal, who always been with blue!.

great potery you are good at words i guess!. keep up the nice poetry workWww@QuestionHome@Com

very boring and simple!. im sorry just telling the truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!!! O, and thanks for the comment on my poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com