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Question: How is "Life Dance" poem!.!.!.!?-otteri selvakumar !!?
Life is

Dance!.!.!.

Some dance

A king!.!.!.or

Officer!.!.!.

Some time

Dance

A Poor!.!.!.or

Peon!.!.!.

Some time dance

A Bigger!.!.!.or

Sumaller!.!.!.

Some time

Dance

A Anon!.!.!.

But dance

Every day

Every time!.!.!.

Different!.!.!.

Different!.!.!.Types

Life is dance!.!.!.

By

Birth to death!.!.!.

+++otteri selvakumarWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I hope you don't mind if I help you with it!?!.!.!.I like your idea of comparing life to a dance!.

Life is a dance
Some dance
As a King!.!.!.or an Officer
Sometimes the dance of life
is that of a poor man
or a peon!.
Sometimes the dance
is large
sometimes the dance
is small!.
Sometimes the dance
is anonymous!.
But you should try to dance
Every day, every time
in a different way!.
Life is a dance
From birth to death

Please don't be offended!. I could not write a poem in a different language to my own!. So, well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very poor english!. very poor!. you dont know even the basics of english grammar!. who asked you to write!? where are you from!? it seems asthough a chinese man is trying to speak greek in a french accent!. your dance is vulgar!.Www@QuestionHome@Com