Critique my poem ja? ^_^?

Question: Critique my poem ja!? ^_^!?

There is a path we all travel
As our lives begin to unravel
There are countless obstacles
But no trek is impossible
If you know where you’re going
And never start showing
No matter how bleak
That you’re weak
Just keep walking
And keep blocking
The doubt in your mind
And you will find
That you have arrived

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Strong and filled with the power of tomorrow!. Never stop; the negative things in life happen to everyone; so keep on trekking!.

Good work!.

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They're awesome, link!. XD you write really good poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.!.
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"There is a path we all travel
As our lives begin to unravel"Www@QuestionHome@Com