My short poem, what do you think?

Question: My short poem, what do you think!?

Here
I've brought
a gun
to start
a war!.

I
have lost
what was
worth fighting
for!.

Love
taught me
to shoot
first when
outdrawn!.

They
were words
but to her
it was too
real!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The last stanza is a real letdown, as you are waiting for a rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is different but i like it!., Keep on writing!. Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com