How is my poem? What does it mean to you?

Question: How is my poem!? What does it mean to you!?

Don't cry
Everything will be alright

All the evil
engolfed in flames

Half way, there
Now, find your way

In your dreams I will guide you
Your dreams will guide you

Don't worry about me
I am dead
Im the flames

Make it back home
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is amateur writing!. For one there is little imagery and you're telling the story not letting the reader see it!. You are using a lot of poetry cliches in here too so clean them up!. You are also a bit too repetitive which can be bad!.

It is a good start!. You need to keep working on it but it is off to a good start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey there's some verses from the song that Will Smith sings in the movie I'm Legend

Um!.!. ur poem got timing and verses all right
But i don't understand what you are meaning!.

It's nice and everything except that the meaning you are meaning is totally uncrackable!.

But i LIKE it! it's Great!!!

Nawa*********Www@QuestionHome@Com

At first it didn't make sense!. but i read it a couple times!. not too shabby!.
but the i am dead, doesn't seem to fit!. everything else is ok :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its ok!.!.!.answer mine please!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com