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Question: Can this be called a poem!?
My boyfriend's birthday is coming!. I wrote something for him!. Not sure whether it is qualified as a poem!. Any input!? Thank you!

To my love
Who has the magic wand
With a little grin turns time around
Filled my heart with innocence like a child
Surrounded me with a secure shield
Nothing worries me in a garden with joys
Celebrate today when it all starts

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To my love
Who has the magic wand
With a little grin turns time around
Fills my heart with the innocence of a child
Surrounds me with a secure shield
Nothing worries me in a garden with joys
Celebrate today Www@QuestionHome@Com

A special world is in between you and me!.
A special bond no one can see !.
A special happiness only I sense every moment
My heart lounges around you!.
Oh my love!
I thank you for being born
Since without you, I am lifeless!.
My whole world and life
is none other but thee!.
To my love
Who is the magic sparkling around my joys!.
Many Many happy returns of the day!.

I hope you like it !.
All the best for your lovely life!.
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I would call that a poem, i make peoms with my friend, and that would be great one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

anything which is not prose is poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes is could be concidered a poem or prose!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com