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Question: My poem needs a name, any ideas!? !! (10 points) !?
Here it is:

Look at the sky,
the sun it shines for you,
and all the clouds, They move out the line for you!.
Look at the sea,
the fish they swim for you,
and all the Storms, The move out the way for you!.
Look in my eyes,
I know they glow for you,
and in my mind, I’m always seeing you!.
Look in my heart,
the blood it pumps for you,
and I can feel, just so much love for you!.



Note: it was originally a song i started writing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I give the world to you

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the world is for you

-or-

everything i do is for you

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its all for you

-0r-

i live for you



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It's All For You
All For You

This one line I think would read better with "into" rather than in!.
Look in my eyes,

T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Look In and SeeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Umm!.!. how about "For You" !?Www@QuestionHome@Com