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Question: Something is missing - could it be love!?
too gooey, right!?

The second time around

Will it ever happen
Will I know when
Will the earth move
Will my body roar
Will I know what to do

Will there be October leaves
Or a blanket of snow
Or fresh spring flowers we watch grow
Will there be music
Will there be dance
Will I be given a second chance
For another romance
To come my way, someday!?

You’ve been gone a long time
But something keeps me true
To you
And I think and I ponder
And I wonder and wander
And know that deep down
There is only one
and it was you

So, forget the leaves,
Forget the snow
Forget the music
Let it all go

Forget the dance
We had a beautiful one
There is no chance
Of a new
Simply because of you



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Enjoy the memories of what once was!.
Keep that love in your heart
Keeping in mind that your heart is not full
There is certainly room for more!.

Not sappy!.!. but keep growing in every way!.!. !Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have to say I really liked your other one a lot more!. That is not to say that this doesn't have potential, it's just !.!.!. well, gooey! Why don't you put it aside for a few weeks and then come back to it!. Then you can do some good revising!. Keep writing; I think you're great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As long as you let the past be your walls then you can never move forward,!.you are stuck in your memories and your life becomes mundane!.!.!. very nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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no thats not gooey at all! its awesome! you go girlWww@QuestionHome@Com