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I wrote this today, and im only 15!. Got any question just ask!.

"Deaths Renewal"

Like a sacraficial eclipse
It brings bones to stones
It sits fears to tears
No matter its age, the soul becomes old
For it was told
What otheres throw, becomes a show
Its sorrow tomorrow, for it never comes
Death blooms, the past no longer looms
The black rose of death tells its story
Redemption becomes temptation !.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think the title you have chosen suits the poem well and the imagery is very good but you need to check you spelling!. :-DWww@QuestionHome@Com