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Question: Should I take it all off!?


Single Exposure

Nowhere to hide, nothing to lose
Layered losses falling off
Before you I knew so little
About me you know so much

Shuttered in this floating cube
A prism of shades in life
Deflected from slights
Imaginary foes as friends
Too much is enough

Corrosion coursing threw me
Time turned again and now
Defenseless demands insist
Off guard, on the stand

Ready - times stop
Scarred - clouds part
Silent - fears hover
Exposed - palms open

Take me as I am

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Geez!.!.!. just what we need !.!.!.!.another naked com - poser!. Strike ! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Of course I will take you as you are, a compassionate human being and passionate poet!. The last five lines of this poem are so intensely beautiful that they could stand alone, but it is the entire poem that makes the profound statement!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Never anything to lose,
coming with nothing to offer
but the heart and the words,
the words scribed on it in fire!.

Ready - first dream
Scarred - me too
Silent - kiss me
Exposed - my heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gladly I, sir, take you as you are, for you have so much
beauty, compassion, empathy, talent, insight and love to offer,
my friend!.

And, you are gorgeous, too!!!

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Very good!.
Well we'd sure know more about each other if we went to a nude beach!. We'd be "exposed" When you're naked your heart is an open book!. Then you can take me!.!.!.!.as I am!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Corrosion coursing threw me

love this line, at first read I thought, through, then realized it was threw

good poem, and this avatar didn't throw me
dahWww@QuestionHome@Com

OMG You have the infamous McDreamy hair! lol heheWww@QuestionHome@Com

Take me as I 'm !.!.
That is the way should be! Well put!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey!.!.!.!.You're kinda cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good and well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very good water man!.!.!. me thnx u need to check Lesley out!.!.!.!. a few bodies up!.!.!. naked woman in sand awaits you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes,
Take it all off!.
Claim personal freedom
Curls, eh!?
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yeah, go aheadWww@QuestionHome@Com

now that's better!Www@QuestionHome@Com