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Position:Home>Poetry> Should I take it all off?Question: Should I take it all off!? Single Exposure Nowhere to hide, nothing to lose Layered losses falling off Before you I knew so little About me you know so much Shuttered in this floating cube A prism of shades in life Deflected from slights Imaginary foes as friends Too much is enough Corrosion coursing threw me Time turned again and now Defenseless demands insist Off guard, on the stand Ready - times stop Scarred - clouds part Silent - fears hover Exposed - palms open Take me as I am ?rad092808 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Geez!.!.!. just what we need !.!.!.!.another naked com - poser!. Strike ! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Of course I will take you as you are, a compassionate human being and passionate poet!. The last five lines of this poem are so intensely beautiful that they could stand alone, but it is the entire poem that makes the profound statement!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Never anything to lose, coming with nothing to offer but the heart and the words, the words scribed on it in fire!. Ready - first dream Scarred - me too Silent - kiss me Exposed - my heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Gladly I, sir, take you as you are, for you have so much beauty, compassion, empathy, talent, insight and love to offer, my friend!. And, you are gorgeous, too!!! maWww@QuestionHome@Com Very good!. Well we'd sure know more about each other if we went to a nude beach!. We'd be "exposed" When you're naked your heart is an open book!. Then you can take me!.!.!.!.as I am!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Corrosion coursing threw me love this line, at first read I thought, through, then realized it was threw good poem, and this avatar didn't throw me dahWww@QuestionHome@Com OMG You have the infamous McDreamy hair! lol heheWww@QuestionHome@Com Take me as I 'm !.!. That is the way should be! Well put!Www@QuestionHome@Com Hey!.!.!.!.You're kinda cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com Good and well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com Very good water man!.!.!. me thnx u need to check Lesley out!.!.!.!. a few bodies up!.!.!. naked woman in sand awaits you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, Take it all off!. Claim personal freedom Curls, eh!? Www@QuestionHome@Com yeah, go aheadWww@QuestionHome@Com now that's better!Www@QuestionHome@Com |