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Question: Just a little 'un, following yesterday's jaunt!. What do you think!?
Cousins meeting
-kisses n' hugs
-pell-mell legs
-flailing arms
-shrieks of laughter
-scattered toys!.
A moment's pause
What's the cause!?
-bleeding knees
-muffled sobs
-tear-streaked faces
-kisses n' hugs
-pain passes
-raised voices
-cacophonous noise
-shrieks of joy
I am blessed
to have such boys!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A MUCH better day than staying glued in front of the computer!
THIS is what life is about!
Good on you!

Plus, you got more fodder for your pen!

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I love this poem and it reminds me of my happier times with all my 60 or so cousins when i was young as my granny had 14 boys and 13 girls!.She had came here from norway and had taught me great values of life!.All her kisses and hugs got her lips a bit sore as she had so many to kiss and love!.I have 1 boy myself and he gets 98 percent of my attention and love always'!.The other goes to the 3 cats' and myself!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I read your words,
Blessed am I!.
Our kids are special,
Future leaders,
Hope of tomorrow,
Pride and Joy,
Protect them all,
Show them love,
Watch them play!.

huggles n squeezles!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Actuall we need to spend more time with our children and families!. Not doing so is a big part of what's wrong in the world!.

Your writing as always was good!. I enjoyed your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your right Granny Jill,,,,Not that anyone cares!!,,,,,,
,,,It's because This is POIFEK,the way it is,,,
Those who are less talented,,,are the ones that do
the deletingWww@QuestionHome@Com

The poem describes the changing moods of children--short people who put their entire being into every moment!. They are, indeed, a blessing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I had 36 cousins on my Mom's side of the family and 11 on my Father's!.
I can relate to this and the many family get togethers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi Granny!.!.!.Just ignore Zelda!. Only people who knows how to appreciate having family and kids would appreciate this poem!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lovely verse for it seems "US Wrinklies!" Zelda has obviously Forgotten we were all children once!.
Thank you, I loved it and yes I am a Nanna to 6 Glorious Tiddly-Peeps!. And 4 Very Loving Children!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's the way I like it!.!.!.uh huh, uh huh!!! Boys are boys are boys!.!.!.whether they're 2 or 99!.!.!.and us women are the very same!

A new format and it's a joy to read this early!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's very lovely granny!.!.!.good selection of words, good sounds and beautiful presentation!. i love it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I tend to agree with Zelda!. Too much of our time is spent on children!. But this is not a critique of your poem!. You wrote it quite nicely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The chaos (in a good sense of the word) of little ones running around is joyous!. Even more so when we join in the fun!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it!.The wildest colts make the best horses!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

mersey sound lives onWww@QuestionHome@Com