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Question: I need honest opinions on this!?
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The clouds are starting to clear away,
Do I know where I am!?
My thoughts are scattering astray,
I don't know where they belong,

Do they belong anywhere!?
Anywhere at all!?
They were here and there,
But now they're gone,

Where do I go from here!?
Do I have a place to go!?
Everything I ever feared,
Has slipped my consciousness,

I feel nothing now, I'm so numb,
What happened to me!?
I'm like a stray bread crumb,
Forever parted from the loaf,

How will I ever be enough!?
I can no longer satisfy someone else,
I can't fill someone up,
I'm just a bunch of nothing!.!.


I don't even know how I came up with this!.!.

And I'm not too sure what it means, but will you guys tell me if you think it's good!?!?

Thanks!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i loved it
except i'm just a bunch of nothing sounds a little unprofessional u know!? but i just really liked the poem, great job!
be sure to check mine out
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ill be honest(im 13)!
It was amazing realy, Emily Dickinson wrote stuff like that!


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