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Question: Not your average love poem!. What do you think of this!?
Baby!?
Don't you think we're being
a little bit
ambitious!?
This situation probably
wont be so
fruitious
But you know how the saying goes
Lemons, beverages
and all that junk
Just have to hope that our hope will hold out
and the saddness
that trickles into our hearts
wont
drip drip drip


drown us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Not your average poem indeed, but a good poem nonetheless!. Great flow like the elegance of trickling waters!.

The narrator is 47 in poem years!. ;) In reality, 17!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

i lovee it!
but i think of it more as a song then a poem
amazing !!

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