Could you rate my poem on a sacle on a scale from 1-10?

Question: Could you rate my poem on a sacle on a scale from 1-10!?

Drifting, Dissolving

My eyes did drift across the room
I did smell a very sweet perfume
It’s fair to say I was consumed
And until I am free, my life can not resume

Slowly, my world dissolved away
Melting, fading each day
I turned to the sky, stars an array
How could you make me feel this way!?

The simple things lost all their shine
The fresh air, the grapes on the vine
I knew this had o be a sign
You look so divine

One thing has always brought me peace
But now I have seen you, and I have lost my release
My world has come to cease
You are my missing piece

When I see you, time seems to stop
I feel like my knees are going to drop
Not so long ago, I was on top
But you have made fall with a flop

I need you; I knew it from the start
You are my missing part
With out you my life will fall apart
Do you know, you have stole my heart
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

a 10!.!.this is excellent+beautiful!.!.i love it!.!. if only it was written 4 me ^_^!.!.keep on writing!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd say a 8 or 9, it's very descriptive and thoughtful and melodic but in some lines it seems like you're just putting in whatever just to make it rhyme, try making just 2 lines rhyme not all 4!. (i'm a poetry freak too, if you want u can email me and we can tak more)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! I give you not a ten but a hundred or 1,000!. I am serious you are amazing, I loved it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would say a 3-4!. Not to be mean, but you're bouncing around in the poem!. I was kind of confused while i was reading it!. It was a nice poem!. You just need to rearrange a few of the paragraphs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry man it sound like you stole these lyrics from a Back Street Boys Song its ****** gayy and you need to stop listening to such gay musicWww@QuestionHome@Com

outstanding !.!.!.!.its a ,:;,;[;[:>>'!.[!.'!.!.{:]=p;=-=[}:!.'(the scale broke)
12!Www@QuestionHome@Com

7!.5!. I'm not really into the line to line rhyme of poetry!. More flow and go!. But it is a wonderful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

7, sorry, it made me laugh, i couldnt take it seriously!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

100 :-D aka 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

If this were for school and you had to write within a given rhyme scheme 7!.

If not try writing more liberally, in free verse!. 3Www@QuestionHome@Com

10+ beautiful!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with random precision oh and if you think you got stuff ur wrong go to poetry!.com and read some of the stuff people post there and you'll see you have nothing compared to most of them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.999999999999999999999999999 or 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

100000! Very good you have a lot of potential!Www@QuestionHome@Com

10Www@QuestionHome@Com

8Www@QuestionHome@Com

5Www@QuestionHome@Com

7Www@QuestionHome@Com

6!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com

9Www@QuestionHome@Com

6Www@QuestionHome@Com

7!.8 ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com

7!.!.!.very interesting!.!.!.kind of makes your mind drift a little!. coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

om gosh that is amazing ! 10!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

10 It so so sweet!. I would so use that in a Valentine card!!!
Can i use it it's so cool!.
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hmm!.!. i would give it an 8
it's just a bit out of rythmWww@QuestionHome@Com

8 i could feel my heart breaking thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

i would grade this poem a 7
it is pretty good : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

6 !.!. just get rid of the cheesey partsWww@QuestionHome@Com

ur gayWww@QuestionHome@Com

i'll say 9!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com