Critique My New Poem: The Autumn Melody?

Question: Critique My New Poem: The Autumn Melody!?

The hot summer had passed by
The cool autumn have arrived
The tree are adorned
with colors like bride
at wedding night
The swift flurry of wind
passes by gently
The trees branches
swinging in joy and extazy
All in heart filled harmony
The golden sun in the blue sky
send its rays to shine
on the pastures,
valleys and hamlets
You can hear the happiness
and the autumn melodyWww@QuestionHome@Com

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The cool autumn have arrived <<< check your grammar!.!."autumn" is singular so why use "have" which is plural!.!.basic SV agreement

The tree are adorned <<< check your grammar!.!.review the SV agreement please

The trees branches <<< I think this should be "the tree branches" or "the tree's branches"

swinging in joy and extazy <<< wrong spelling of "extazy" it should be "ecstasy"

Your work is average!. It is not what I call "beautiful" but decent!.

I agree with Lemon!. Your work is too cliched!. It would be better if you stated the unobvious!.
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There are a few grammatical errors (such as the ones Maddie mentioned), however, I liked this one!

The swift flurry of wind
Passes by gently!.!.!.!.

You described the wind as both swift AND gently!? maybe choose another crafty word instead of "gently", perhaps "briskly"!? or "With a flash!?"

My favorite line is "Sends it's rays to shine"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice imagery, try to be less cliche, think outside the square!.
A great start :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry not that great!. I love poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!.!. Very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

no!.Www@QuestionHome@Com