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Question: What do you think of this poem so far!?
Torn upon the jagged edges of a broken heart
i am unmade, and float into the ether!.
no hands to feel your skin,
no mouth to kiss,
i am but a wisp of anger in the air!.


should i end it there or try to build it up!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it the way it isWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it!. Either way, leave it or continue, I think it's has a lot of beautiful imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com