Torn upon the jagged edges of a broken heart
i am unmade, and float into the ether!.
no hands to feel your skin,
no mouth to kiss,
i am but a wisp of anger in the air!.
should i end it there or try to build it up!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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i am unmade, and float into the ether!. no hands to feel your skin, no mouth to kiss, i am but a wisp of anger in the air!. should i end it there or try to build it up!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like it the way it isWww@QuestionHome@Com I really like it!. Either way, leave it or continue, I think it's has a lot of beautiful imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |