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Question: Is this poem ruder than usual!?
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CROMAG AND NEANDER
INVENTED ART

I prefer soft rock:
limestone, shale, talc!.
I saw an article in last month’s
“Better Cracks and Crevices”
about the famous “Home
away from Homer” cave redone
completely by Van Cleef and Arpel,
The power and strength of raw mineral deposits
juxtaposed with human fecal matter…
an exciting display!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I hate you, you know!. Always you are there, saying - huh, you think you are a poet!?!.!.!.well, watch me! Like the daring young man on the flying trapeze you make it look so easy!.!.!.well, for the benefit of any non-poetry writer who happens to have wandered on to this site, take it from me - easy it ain't!. Go away TD you are giving me an inferiority complex!.
Retires to corner to sulk!.

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Things haven't changed much!. I am pretty sure I saw "raw mineral deposits / juxtaposed with human fecal matter" in some modern art museum!. What's progress!?

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*I* crack *You* up!?!?!? Hellooooo!?

Remember, I'm married to a carpenter!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lot of people like brown tones! It goes well with their leopard prints!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A good accessory for this 'Home away from Homer' cave wiould be the poem on P!. 26 of "The Best American Poetry: 2007!."
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