How do you like this poem i wrote?

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it's just is a freestyle poem i wrote about me and my mother's relationship!. tell me what you think--

i can not do this!.
i can not let you treat me this way!.
i can not live with you much longer!.
i can not handle you anymore!.
you are abusive to my emotions!.
i tell you that, but you ignore me!.
and tonight you ignored my words for the last time!.
if it happens again i will live where i should be living!.
and you will not have a say in anything that happens to me!.
because no matter what you say i am not worthless!.
if anyone is it would be you!.
i am trying to hard to help myself to deal with you!.
and tonight is the night that i will get help!.
you mean nothing to me now!.
nothing more than a signature on my birth certificate!.
you were always a terrible mother!.
and that is all you ever will be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I am so very sorry for you pain !.!.!.!.!. I relate to your poem as I too have a mixed up relationship with my own mother!. I am not sure how old you are but I am now in my 30's and well things have not gotten any better but I have learned to love my mother to spite her lack of effort to love me and believe me I rest easy knowing that even though I do not have the mother I always wished I could have, I was blessed with two daughters myself to love, cherish and encourage!. So continue to write out your feelings it is a great release and helps others to identify their issues - you may just help someone one day with the same issue!. Well done ! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, some major emotion in there!.
I'm not an expert when it comes to freestyle poems, but what you got I'm liking ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com