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Position:Home>Poetry> Would you come out and sit on the porch with me?Question: Would you come out and sit on the porch with me!? Sitting on the porch
On a swing made for two The day is growing dim I wait for you The moon slides in and out Between willowy clouds The crickets make music The frogs join in loud The stream behind me Chuckles in the breeze Night owl swoops down From the trees As the darkness Lights up With A million Tiny fireflies Blinking and winking The screen door opens I look to see You ARE coming To sit with me And I smile Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: In delight I sit with you in waning light cotton-ball clouds seem to line up for a mile They remind me of a story you know my style but still you smile the silver moon-cast wood-scape field lights up an inner sight I ask if you don't mind can I go get a pen to write!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Dear Maddamselfly, That is beautiful you are incredibly creative and write beautifully!. I'm certain that there will be answers from men who would be very happy to "sit with you!." I love your poems and didn't realize at first that you are the writer!. LilaWww@QuestionHome@Com To sit with you in your porch swing, Would be indeed a pleasant thing!. What joy to all we two could bring, The moment we decide to sing!. I feel the love that you did bring, And I brought you this diamond ring!. I love porch swings and your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely! You took me there for a moment, I even thought of the drinks, Soft drinks, after swinging! Ok, never mind, a coffee 'd do!. Well done! Www@QuestionHome@Com The moon slides in and out Between willowy clouds The crickets make music The frogs join in loud I love sitting on the porch!. I love this poem about one of my favorite things to do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com quiet and lovely description of an evening on the porch!. I can hear the squeak of the old porch swing!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I would share a swing with you anytime!.!.!.poetically!.!.!. and I smile back!.!.!. nicely written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's wonderful! Looks like your muse caught up with you on this one!. Great stuff!. Felt like I'd had a little "relaxing down time" just reading it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com did you write that!? awesomeness! i praise this poem and who ever wrote it!Www@QuestionHome@Com |