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Question: Do you like my poem!? Rate it plz!.!.!.!?

Under the desert sun
You and I
Holding hands
You and I
Loving
You and I
Quiet
You and I
Happy
Peaceful
Are you and I

I know it's still rough, but do you like it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It can be a read backwards, from bottom to top ("I" to "under") and become even more interesting!.

edit: I just got it the third time around, I wasn't expecting to read something clever on yahoo answers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey Marc,
This is a very good attempt!. Dont worry of people who do not appreciate this!. I think this is very creative attempt!. It depicts Love, Romance & Feelings all in one!. Build on it!. I am sure this will turn out to be a very good poem!.
You are natural!. Dont stop writing!. With experience, you will be in position to create many good & better poems!.
If this is your first attempt, I will rate this work at 7!.
Good Luck !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its should go like

You and I
Under The desert Sun
Holding Hands
you and I
Loving
Touching
you and I
Happy
Peaceful
Are You and I

!.!.!. lol
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I coughed projectile vomit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol it took me 3 times to read it but i finally got it lol
its really creative i like its cute 7/10

later dayzWww@QuestionHome@Com

to be honest you and i got on my nerves!.i also liked the version the gal madeWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol it took me once to read it !. its really good !. its really creative i like its cute 9/10
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it was okay
i'll give it a 4
?Music is Life?
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a smidge confusing but good
i give it a 6Www@QuestionHome@Com