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Question: While waiting on the USPS, I have posted this poem!. Will you take a look at it for me!?
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WINSLOW B?TRECK LIVES IN
THE ARTS AND CRAFTS DISTRICT


In the shop downstairs,
‘Curiosities’
the red leather sofa’s marked
NOT FOR SALE,

It’s for sitting, Sarah says,
a place for resting heads,
to see the things she sells,
on the walls
and on the shelves,
or in the bins
stickered red, green and yellow!.

I’ll have three of these,
Mon Chéri, if you please,
pointing to the box of Polka Dots!.

The rounds ones, very nice,
an ebonizing slice,
set upon the white,
spaced carefully!.

“Would you care to try the stripes,
or, perhaps, seersucker pipes!?”

No, the spots are all I need,
I don’t like when colors bleed,
I like to know what’s what
and what I see!.

“Thank you,” Sarah says,
“Come again, for hues instead!.
‘Curiosities’ is here
just down the stairs!.”

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nice!.
I prefer the subtleties!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A very quaint little shop indeed! Makes me want to go sit on the red sofa for a bit!.
'Curiosities'!.!.!.!.!.Now THAT is genious!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A palette should not be too clean!. Some mystery is necessary!.
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Love the shop!. What's USPS!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love hues!

USPS: sounds promising!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

like the way it flows!.!.!.!. keep writing, yo on da right track!Www@QuestionHome@Com