What do you think of this poem? Comments, ratings, suggestions?

Question: What do you think of this poem!? Comments, ratings, suggestions!?

You could be
The leaf that never falls from
the tree
You could be
The sun that never leaves
the sky
This might be
The happy ending without
the ending
This might be
a reason to try

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i think this is really great!. right now, the only thing i can say is find someone who can compose some good music because i'm hearing music and keep on doing this!.
both of them are!. good luck!
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I thought it was lovely!.

It gave me warmth in my heart,
that which is not usually there!.
For my heart is usually cold,
I don't think that fair!

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I can't begin to tell you how refreshing and uplifting this is! I really like it- softens the heart, calms the mind and an all around cozy feeling of warmth- grounding and spiritual!. Kudos! Www@QuestionHome@Com