Butterfly - comments or suggestions?

Question: Butterfly - comments or suggestions!?

The Butterfly

The butterfly has found
a place

to light, the flower he loves
most!. The

talented butterfly
can dance

upon three separate
parts of

the beautiful flower
at once

simultaneously,
and still

leave the very, very best
to share!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Interesting form!.!.!.the poem itself is beautiful!. I sense the line breaks might reflect the physical movements of the butterfly!.!.!.it keeps the poem a little off balance, but then that could very well be your intent!.

Overall, I like it very much!.!.!.I wouldn't really change a thing other than a semi-colon after "light" instead of the comma!.

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Butterfly
The butterfly is
a fly of beauty
It is also part of
nature
The butterfly will
sit on flowers
in someones yard
or they will fly
in the trees!.
also whether its a yard
or in the forest!.
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Man,youre awesome!.!.woww!.!.!.jus love it!.!.!.keep going!.!.!.gud luck!.!.n God bless!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com