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Question: Do we get the feeling of deja vu!?
Fragile Steel
And the beast advances cadence kept
Beating drums, beating drums
And the beast devours, cadence kept
Flee before, flee before
And empires topple, world inverts
Beating drums, beating drums
Calling your Gods or your Allahs
Flee before, flee before
And the beast advances, cadence kept
As centuries unfold
And the beast devours, cadence kept
Back and forth, back and forth
Fragile world we claim, fragile world
Beating drums, beating drums
Fragile steel we yield, fragile steel
Flee before, flee before
And…!.
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Ha ha ha ha!.!.!.!.!.!.
This is really good!.!.!.!.!.
One of your best!!!!
I can just picture it!.!.the beginning of a good movie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like this very much, especially since you leave the resolution to the readers' imaginations!. And in truth, there is no answer to the implied question of what is going to happen to our "fragile world"--or perhaps an answer we do not want to hear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
the sadness and anguish of repeated stupidity and pridefullness without resolution, or even hope for resolution!. The drum beat repetition is so powerful! Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Fragile Steel" and deju vu!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Yes the feeling is true!.
Was it Will Rogers that said, "History doesn't repeat it self, but it
rhymes!." Excellent beat Neon Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Neon, I believe this is your finest poem I've ever read here!!!! WOW!!!
Repetition without incipience, boredom!.!.!.THAT'S the ticket!!! Do another!. This is a different style, and WOW!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best meter I've read in weeks!.!.!. haunting melody!.!.!.words resonate like skipped rocks ripple water!.!.!. maybe a touch of Dylan Thomas feel to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, this is very fine, VSOP, as it were!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fits right there in an album of Civil War traditional songs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is great and just in time! Fragile steel, for sure!
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good poem neon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great poem Neon!. And !.!.!. so it begins again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
OMG!.!. It's GREAT!.!.Did you write this!? You could be a poet!!!!
Oh wait!.!.!.YOU ARE !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com