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Question: Another Partenza, what say ye!?
AUTUMN MANIA

A fresh breath of air
Air the room that I may breath
Breath not come since May
May not before Fall since
Since I waited the temperature's fall
Fall come and cooler temperature
Temperature changing, each night's cooler
Cooler mood after Summer's hot nights
Nights still find my passion hot
Hot to try the latest rage
Rage forward new season's latest
Latest stye to cap the seasons
Season's very best coat and cap
Cap tipped askew, loose slung coat!.

Fresh coat begins, ample room
Room I enter where once I waited
Waited until Fall had come
Come the time of leaves changing
Changing to fire, brighten the mood
Mood swings of Fall, embers of passion
Passion to finish all I find
Find by next moon at latest
Latest obsessions all will try
Try to keep up, all moves forward
Forward dreams in new style
Style and shape myself the best
Best my emotions, appear not askew
Askew like my coat, loose slung
Slung over my shoulder as doorman tipped,
Tipped his cap!. I move with gait loose
Loose now move to season afreshWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
me saith, where's the Ritalin!? As I am presently on Prednisone for severe allergies AND have had my 80 y/o Mother in residence for 2 very long weeks I am feeling at the very least, mildly psychotic, though not Matricidal anymore!.!.!.she just left for the airport!. Almost enough to make a believer of me again!. And I love the freneticness of this fun poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Definitely a partenza!. Definitely mania as you are jumping around! I get the impression of falling leaves each with a line of the poem!. My only critique is that a patenza often lends itself to be disjointed in flowing from line to line!. But I think you recognized that and perhaps by your title give credence!. An interesting read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I didn't know the name of the style but have written in same!. Ain't they fun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com