Could you rate my poem?

Question: Could you rate my poem!?

Let the blood run cold
and the shovels overload,
watch, she's dressed in black!.

those who arrive, to help who survived
ignore the simple fact-

who's still, was old and sad and told,
'no post for you today'
the regretful twist
is those she missed,

are kneeling and pretending to pray!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Awwww!. Its so beautiful I want to cry!.

The above was a lie I want to be violently ill in your faceWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think you are able to picture things in a way others may not be capable of!. :) Although I didn't understand the poem, i think it is very interesting!. Good job Www@QuestionHome@Com

The first stanza is good!. The rest don't really make sense!. Sorrryyyy :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats boring!.!.!. make something nice !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com