What do you think of these three haiku poems I wrote?

Question: What do you think of these three haiku poems I wrote!?

I've never written poetry before, so rate them on a beginner level!. But be honest!

You say, "Don't rush me!."
But time is of the essence
Hurry hurry now!.

Time does not exist
The clock will wind endlessly
But has no meaning

We will all forget
And time and space will collide
What will happen then!?

I don't know why I had time on my mind!.!.!.but anyway, what do you think!? Thanks in advance!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Sorry, but I find it more than a bit disingenuous of you to claim that you didn't know if these were "even haiku!." They are haiku in structure but not in poetic concept!. Read up on haiku and keep trying!.

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a haiku is generally 3 lines with 5 syllables each in them

so the third one!.!.!.

u could go

We Will all forget,
Time and Space Collide
What will happen then/next!?

the 2nd!.!.!.
Time does not exist
Clocks Wind Endlessly
Time has no meaning

The 1st!.!.

You say 'dont rush me'
Time is of the essence - this is 6 syllables!.!. dont know what to do with it
Hurry Hurry now!.!.

well done though, good job, i dont mean to criticise but in order to be a haiku each line should only be 4 syllables!.

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wow!
I really liked them like!.!.!.I don't even have any criticism!
they're just really good!.
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Wow!. These are amazing! Did you really make these by yourself!. Here is a tip for haiku's
The first line has 5 syllables
The next has 7
and the last has 5

Toilet

Noisy water runs
Down a swishy fast flush
Whole in the bottom
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i think its AMAZING!
it creates that sense of ambiguity which is PERFECT in a poem, makes you think!
great jobbb
write more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the first 2 better then the last on, but they're all good!. do u think u could help me write a haiku about fire for my english classWww@QuestionHome@Com

Theyre great!. I like the 1st one especially!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

they're excellentWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love all of those
they are absolutely great :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

dont let tinkerbel change youre poem!.!.its good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is wonderful!.!.!.!.if your just beggining than you need to continue because you will make one great poet!.!.!.!.i ?ed it!!!

what ever happens when time stops,
do our hearts stop beating!?
or do we live to love tomorrow,
while time and space are weaving!?

just made that up!.!.!.lol seriously though keep writing!. save everything u write and maybe one day u could publish it!. those are my hopes for my poetry!. oh and btw as far as i know a haiku goes 5-7-5 too!. it's right!. i even noticed right away as i was reading!. im impressed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I actually see them as one!. The continual reference from one to the other connects them!. Three parts that form a whole!.

Since you are new an know not that of a Haiku!. (wink)
I thought I would share this just with you!.

Main Entry: hai·ku
Pronunciation: \?hī-(?)kü\
Function: noun
Inflected Form(s): plural haiku
Etymology: Japanese
Date: 1902
: an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively ; also : a poem in this form usually having a seasonal reference — compare tanka

My favorite is
"Time does not exist
The clock will wind endlessly
But has no meaning"

I like!.
Sam
Edit - did someone say there are to be only four!? It flowed 5-7-5 in all for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com