This is a poem I wrote for English class!.
Figured out it is worthless now, the poem can only be 21 lines!.
Mine goes way beyond, but I wanted to know is it good:
(IGNORE TYPOS!)
I think I should call it 'One Word'
Just one word can start it all,
Just one word can end it all,
Just one word can destroy it all,
Just one word can kill it all!.
Everything begins at one word,
The Earth,
The Sun,
The sky,
Hate,
Love!.
We can all start,
We can all end,
But there's only one thing,
One thing that can stop us!.
We stop ourselves,
We hate ourselves,
Can't express what I mean,
Can't express what you mean!.
No success,
No future,
No money,
Nothing to live for!.
Till we say one word,
Nothing begins,
But one too many can end it all!.
One too many, can finish everything!.
Isolated,
Lost,
Lonely,
Discrete!.
Hidden,
Secret,
Unreaveled,
Alone!.
We tend to hide ourselves,
Beneath a great surface,
Cannot redeem ourselves,
Deep as it goes, the deeper we crawl!.
We crawl as far as we can go,
Finding another place to hide,
Hoping that we will get success,
By going down!?
There's something down there,
Just know it,
It happens when you ain't fit,
To live life, without skin, naked and bear!.
It happens when you are the outcast,
Happens when you can't forget your past,
Happens when you feel depressed,
Hiding yourself, being opressed!.
I hate myself,
I hate life,
I hate others we say,
No where to run away!.
Truth is,
When we dig the hole,
We don't hide,
We just arn't seen!.
People know you are there,
You can't hide,
There's no where to run,
No escape!.
Life is a glass,
Fully transparent,
Doesn't matter where you are,
You will be seen!.
Don't waste time,
It ticks faster than light,
Nothing's wrong with being depressed,
Nothing is wrong, nothing!.
Or is there something wrong,
Seeing thourgh blackness and desparity,
I can't tell,
One, word, one word can tell it all!.
A black whole,
Is there waitin' for you,
The **** you go through,
You must hate yourself!.
You curse out life,
Stab yourself with a knife,
The black whole is still there,
Why!? Why!? WHY!!?
Why doesn't it go away,
Why can't it disappear,
Why can't I hide myself,
Why!?
Why am I failing in life!?
Why is this happening to me!?
Why was I the one!?
Why did I become the outcast of society!?
My life has been torned apart,
I am irascible,
Life is made to loathe,
Life is made to loathe!.
But this isn't the end,
There is more to come!
Secluded on an island,
With water all around!.
There is no escape!
There is no escape!
There is no escape!
There is no way out!.!.!.
Once you are sucked inside,
The light disappears,
The candle burns out,
The clock ticks faster!
You can't find yourself,
Stuck in crap,
Stuck in yourself,
Stuck in a word, stuck in a blackhole!
You life has gone down the toilet,
Your life is a mess,
Next thing you know,
40 livin' in your mom's basement!
Listening to the music of the past,
The rock and the pop, gettin drunk at the bar,
Remorsing over your life,
But did you even get that far!?
Did you kill yourself!?
Did you stab yourself!?
Did you even survive,
The raft and fury of society!?
But you know what is too funny!?
You could have stopped it all,
You could have avoided this crap,
You didn't have to this!
There wasn't supposed to be a black hole,
There wasn't supposed to be any hate,
There wasn't supposed to be any wrong,
Nothing like this was supposed to happen!.
Things didn't go as planned,
But you failed to plan,
Which must means,
You planned to fail!.
But lemme tell something,
Remember, one word,
One word could have changed it all!.
One word could have stopped it all!.
When they said 'drugs',
You should've say 'no'!.
When they said 'do it'
You should've said 'no'!.
When they told you to stop,
'Roll with us, we know we are right'
You should've just dropped out,
And said, 'no, not tonight'
Not tonight,
Not tommorrow,
Not Never,
Never!.
We can all start,
We can all end,
But there's only one thing,
One thing that can stop us!.
Everything begins at one word,
The Earth,
The Sun,
The sky,
Hate,
Love!.
Just one word can start it all,
Just one word can end it all,
Just one word can destroy it all,
Just one word can kill it all!.
One word!.!.!.!.!.!.
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