Did I get this right? 5,4,3,2,1,2,3,4,5?

Question: Did I get this right!? 5,4,3,2,1,2,3,4,5!?

You are north to my South
The wind rustling the leaves
Sun shine through clouds
Light rain drops
Touch me
If
You should
Leave me now
Refuse to shine on
Remove the pleasant effects
My south would evaporate slowly

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

If you need a little lovin'
Call on me!.!.!.!.(alright)
If you want a little huggin'
Call on me baby!.!.!.!.(mmhmm)
Oh I'll be right here at home!.
All you gotta do is pick up the telephone and dial now
(Chorus):
6-3-4-5-7-8-9 (that's my number!)
6-3-4-5-7-8-9

me thinks your muse toked one too many, although the message was clear the muse was tipsy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are north to my South - 6
The wind rustling the leaves - 6
Sun shine through clouds - 4
Light rain drops - 3
Touch me - 2
If - 1
North should - 2
Turn and recede - 4
Refuse to shine on - 5
Purging the pleasant effects - 7
South would surely evaporate slowly - 10

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To have the right number
Of words in each
Line you really
Need to
Leave
A space
Between your title
And the poem itself
When you post your work!.

also, you have really written a 5,4,3,2,1,2,3,4,4,5 even at that if you examine it closely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

YUP!.!.But, as soon as I read " If you should leave now" the orchestra started and kind of pushed me over the edge!.!.!.

"you'll take away the biggest part of me,oooo ,ooooo,oo"
I just never cared for that song!.!.!.!.GM you fly gal youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awww don't feel too bad I am always miss counting myself!

Maybe you still can fix if you want too!?
Cheers!

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