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I see her getting hurt,
Everyday he hits her,
I wish there was something I could do,
Because the victim is my sister!.

She screams in pain,
As I listen she screams out my name,
There's nothing to do,
Because I will get hit too!.

My sister cries as she tells me the story,
I start to cry too and say I'm sorry,
She tries to go away,
But I see he doesn't let her!.

Why did you stay!?
Now I miss you,
I see it's too later,
You passed away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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