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Life must go on
By Dorothy D Mcclendon

The day shall come yes it will arrive
I wont be ready i'll still be surprised
I'll try my hardest and best not to cry
Leaving back everything i cared for
Leaving back everything i longed for
Leaving with a non understandable reason
Leaving with no rights at all
Its like sitting at home writting my own sad song

I know i once wanted to go
You dont have to remind me though
I didn't see how much i loved it here
Nothing really far everything so near
I used to say i hated this place
Now im saying i love this place
Sometimes i just want to cry
But then i realize that its to late for tears

I wonder what it would be like when im gone
I wonder what people will say when i leave
I wonder what things will be like over there
I wonder how life will be all the way over here
I wonder what all my friends would think
I wonder what they would be doing everyday
I wonder again what it would be like when im gone
Then i wonder it would be the same cause life must still go on!.!.!.!.!.
Even while im goneWww@QuestionHome@Com

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