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Question: What do you think of this confusing poem I wrote!?
It is titled: Blasphemers Doxology

Blasphemers Doxology

Night time is here!. Now I shall close my eyes!.
I drift into the chasms of my mind
Falling far away from reality
Into the heart of complete emptiness!.

So many years and I have not seen rest!.
So many nights spent in utter sadness!.
I can not explain these fears I have now!.
I can not go on, there must be relief!.

But now the bell doth ring for me!.
“Come and believe!.” death sings softly!.
And I hear him calling my name
Through the cold winds that pass my ears!.

This path I shall tread alone
Under winters vacant skies!.
Now I shall wipe my own tears
And cry unto him that hears!.

Death is only the beginning!
Baptize your headless goats in black water!.
Worship your inverted crucifixes!.
Sacrifice your children unto Satan!.
Watch him destroy you- I pray he’ll kill you!.

I praise the high king- master destroyer!.
Satan is an excuse to show weakness!.
Praise him all you want- Praise him for your death!.
I don’t have to puke blood to show my hate!.

Death is only the beginning!
Unveil the blackest judgment!.
Death is only the beginning!
Torch the condemning Christians!.
I want their ashes scattered
On ‘Satan’s’ holocaust grounds!.

And truly If one believed those words
Then may their heads be laid under swords!.





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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
bro, that is deep!. i like it, you should really think about writing more!. i wish i could write like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats really good!
it could make good lyrics too!
are you any good with music composition!? if you are--go for it!
reaaally good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh wow!. just so you know real Christians aren't condeming!. if you're honestly a true Christian!. someone who is CHRISTlike, because Jesus wasn't in the least condemning!. Www@QuestionHome@Com