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Question: What do you think of this poem about transformations, and friendship!?
Who are your friends!?

At night I dream I slip
up into the trees

and blend between the leaves

until

a solitary owl finds me!.

Who are your friends!?

I fly beside him
on his hunting raids

against caravans
of fleeing mice and

long parades
of snuffling groundhogs!.

Who are your friends!?

And when we return
to the safety of the branches
far far above

we eat in silence

tearing at the flesh

and throwing up the bones!.

Who are your friends!?

In the morning
at the breakfast table

I look across at you

and smile

and you smile in return
as if you've been there
all along!.



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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'll give you my view on the content, not on the way you've written it down (honestly, way too many spaces there :P)!. It's a great poem, really, I like the way you write out your feelings, good use of your vocabulary!. Keep on writing, you seem to be gifted with talent!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com