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new light of day spread your rays into my darkness as you venture high into the day take my burdens upon your mighty shoulders carry them off into the dusk so when evening comes and dark of night returns sweet slumber I shall embrace weary free till tomorrow's morn when I shall ask of you again this load to carry!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Nice Ma!.!.!.!.!.!. It would be wonderful if it did take all of my burdens!. I find enough joy knowing that I have yet seen another morning sun!Www@QuestionHome@Com A glorious morning such as this one makes me want to sing to the sun as it rises!. This is imaginative and delightful, a transcendent reflection in free verse!. It gives me a hopeful and peaceful feeling to read this poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't talk to the sun, but I sometimes wink at it, and it knows to shine a little light on me!. Morning and evening, my favorite times of day!. May the sun take your burdens upon his mighty shouldersWww@QuestionHome@Com What a beautiful poem!. I really liked the idea of getting rid of your problems while the sun is going down!. This poem makes me want to go to the lake I live by and watch the sunset, thanks for the good idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this free-form poem and the personification of the Sun!. May all your nights be spent in sweet slumber and all your loads be light!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It would be nice if the Sun could carry our burdens or just melt them away would even be a better solution! It will get better Ma be patient! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com When I talk to the Sun I try to remember my sunglasses! Nice sentiment here, probably a metaphor too! lol Www@QuestionHome@Com Amen, Ma!. Amen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sometimes before, I'm a little impatient!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i do every time the sun shines on my face!. that is the best feelingWww@QuestionHome@Com Actually Ma, I mostly say "C'mon Son, wake up!. Time to get out of bed!." I like this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com aww thats pretty =)Www@QuestionHome@Com |