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Question: Are you going to be invited back!?
just helping the food theme for the day!.
lets call this fast food poetry!. lol


MANNERS
before you came in
i hope you looked at your feet
because if you didnt
your maker you meet!.

washing your hands
is essential round here
even opening Ms!.Coolbox
to snag a cold beer!.

and if you didnt say hi
to mr!. cook
maybe he grabs you
whoa! meathook!

now we sit down
to the round table
always pull the chairs
for those who arent able!.

and Ahem!.!.
if you handle butter
its gonna be greasy
please use your knife
thank you its easy!.

"Please pass the gravy
it sure smells good!"
is better than reaching
or "watch out if you would"!.

It is polite
to watch for thingys
that maybe spilled down your chin
if its not a whisker son
use your napkin!.

what is all this schlurby noise
during this food stuff!?
careful, the pigs may hear us
and we're out of earmuffs!.

sometimes it is hard
to be sorta subdued
nourish a body rationally
with all the yummy food

but all the manners care about
is everyones relaxed,
with plenty of please thank you
and sure, have a cup!.

thats so noones offended,
or worst throws up!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very funny!. It does need some attention to flow though to make it really shine!.

Before you came in
hoped you wiped your feet
because if you didn't
the maker you'll meet!

Grab a sandwich with a napkin!. Put on your bib and pull up the chair and with edit pen you'll really make us grin!Www@QuestionHome@Com

to sit at MY table, a meal or snack,
be mindful of manners, or face a smack!.

mannerly, not a gross boar,
things you mentioned, I abhor!.

please and thank you, not so hard,
politeness and manners, or dine on lard!.


thoughtful bit of verse you offered,,, Www@QuestionHome@Com

This was funny and great , neoman and traveling are giving you a helping hand, so your funny will shine and stand! Really Really lots of effort I see that you have put into it!
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, now I'm just thinking about food here and very hungry!.

I think your efforts to do something different is GREAT!. I love the creativity of this poem!.

You did great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It starts off poorly and gets worse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What time is dinner!? The mention of gravy makes me very, very hungry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm off to the galley to get me some!.!.!.!.!.
With a rebel yell!.!.!.more, more, moreWww@QuestionHome@Com