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Moist lips; honey!.
Soft & lush!.
Eyes, a window to the soul!.
A glance my way; her wicked, toxic smirk tugs at the corner of her…
Mouths are brought together, insipid useless conversation!.
Velvet touches, lustful whimpers in the dark!.
Ripe & puckered, her youth surround these petite projections!.
Throbbing tension!.
Nip savagely between the torn rib bones!.
A fistful to jerk back the neck!.
An arch of the back to meet my thighs!.
Expose the lotus, choke her center!.
Covet me!
I am amused by her persistence!.
Her actions never tepid!.
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